The Path

Thursday, June 19, 2014 18 Comments A+ a-

The Path


She connived with secret agents to befriend his son as part of political intrigue to get confidential information.



 He was chained in foreign land for denying their offer after vehement argument.



The path we took in difficult situation defines our character. Following his father's teaching he went to the FBI. The conspiracy then was unraveled. 


This post is linked to  #55WordChallenge: Week Sixteen and Three Word Wednesday.(words in bold)

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Anita
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June 19, 2014 at 3:33 PM delete

Nice secret-agent story, Cifar. Taking info from the child is a great tactics!
Even my Mom shared the same message about the road taken defining our character. :)

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Usha Menon
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June 19, 2014 at 5:19 PM delete

A good story.How cruel it was to involve a child in unlawful activity.

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Uma
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June 19, 2014 at 7:35 PM delete

Beautiful..a great story in 55.

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Jae Rose
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June 19, 2014 at 7:36 PM delete

You use contrast so powerfully in your work..the opening verse and image certainly points to a different path..very clever

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Sheilagh Lee
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June 19, 2014 at 8:08 PM delete

A well thought out precise story.

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umangawasthi
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June 19, 2014 at 8:58 PM delete

Smart mother! Liked your story!

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June 19, 2014 at 10:59 PM delete

True.. the paths we choose define who we are.. :)

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Arushi Ahuja
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June 20, 2014 at 1:02 AM delete

great story !! as always!!

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shailajav
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June 20, 2014 at 5:13 PM delete

Very well done, Cifar. I like the conspiracy angle you took with the prompts!

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