Lucky Coin

Saturday, June 14, 2014 7 Comments A+ a-

Lucky Coin



The cyclist cycled from night to sunrise to reach the telephone in adjacent town to get back his lucky coin.


He mistakenly telephoned from there with it. 


He wanted to reach before the man who came to collect coins from booth. He crashed into speeding truck and died on the spot, coin was really lucky ?

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#55WordChallenge: Week Fifteen 

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Anita
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June 14, 2014 at 3:34 PM delete

Aww! he paid for his life for the coin, Cifar...
Sad story.
Great take on the prompt :)

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umangawasthi
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June 15, 2014 at 12:11 AM delete

OMG! That's sad! Good though!

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Usha Menon
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June 15, 2014 at 9:52 AM delete

Very poignant story. In a few words you have captured emotions brilliantly.

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Uma
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June 15, 2014 at 3:24 PM delete

Ouch! Sad but a great twist in the end.

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June 15, 2014 at 5:34 PM delete

Great take on the prompt Cifar.. :)

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AmitAag
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June 20, 2014 at 11:50 AM delete

The twist at the end..!

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