Trustworthy

Saturday, December 06, 2014 10 Comments A+ a-

Trustworthy



" I love you from the bottom of my heart," she was the third girl in a week to whom he was repeating the same sentence and in the same jubilant manner.

She neglected him when he advanced to kiss her and stared towards the door as looking for someone. 

Suddenly door opened with a thud and two girls entered when both of them was compact in each other's arm.

These two girls were called by the girl in his arms to show his real face to them as she was friend to these girls.

They scolded him and threw him out of the room for breaching their trust while he dusted off his clothes and walked away to find a girl more trustworthy than all of them.

This post is linked to Three Word Wednesday #404 ( compact,jubilant,neglected ) and Five Sentence Fiction (trust ). 

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Sandra
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December 6, 2014 at 5:55 PM delete

trustworthy and confused...:)

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Ramya P
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December 6, 2014 at 9:18 PM delete

A different and unique take on the prompt... :)

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December 7, 2014 at 1:54 AM delete

Ah exposed for what his is - lets hope the next girl can see through him too!

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Ankita
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December 7, 2014 at 11:24 AM delete

hahah! many boys are like that and they consider such things as fun..cheap.

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Sankeerth
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December 7, 2014 at 11:45 AM delete

he got what he deserved!

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vishalbheeroo
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December 7, 2014 at 8:39 PM delete

Very well written. It serves him right!

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Ranu 802
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December 7, 2014 at 10:40 PM delete

It's ironic for him to look for someone trustworthy!

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K R Smith
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December 8, 2014 at 11:43 AM delete

He sure got a surprise!

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Jae Rose
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December 8, 2014 at 6:41 PM delete

And long may he keep searching..alone...and fruitlessly I hope!

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humbird
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December 12, 2014 at 11:46 PM delete

It made me smile. He needs really slow down...

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