Tit For Tat

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Tit For Tat



Monika refused Rahul's proposal to be his friend when he hold her hand in the public."She looked most beautiful when she answered his misbehaviour with a slap on his face. He went in anger and confronted her with an acid bottle in his hand on her way to college."I will break your pride baby."

He opened the bottle and raised his hand to throw it on her,suddenly a cricket ball banged into the acid bottle. All acid spilled on his entire body. She had the last laugh when he screamed in pain which he wanted for her.

This post is part of 100 Words On Saturday 2014-4 and Wednesday Prompt 2014-5 by Writetribe

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January 30, 2014 at 4:58 PM delete

Oh ! The art of combining two prompts into one and blending it beautifully :) A nice read :) serves him right for thinking of spoiling her beauty :(

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iamstri
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January 30, 2014 at 5:38 PM delete

That's awesome :) One response to two prompts!

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cifar shayar
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January 30, 2014 at 7:00 PM delete

thank you for appreciating this art

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Kalpana Solsi
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January 30, 2014 at 10:39 PM delete

How brilliantly you have combined both the prompts and the mischief mongers should realize that they are digging their own graves.

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Shilpa Garg
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January 30, 2014 at 11:04 PM delete

Aah! He deserved it!
And combining 2 prompts in one is awesome :)

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Rajlakshmi
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January 31, 2014 at 6:38 AM delete

Its sad how rejected live results in such horrific behaviour. Well written.

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Rajlakshmi
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January 31, 2014 at 6:38 AM delete

*love ... damn autocorrect :)

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cifar shayar
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January 31, 2014 at 1:15 PM delete

yes they must prepare for the worse

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vishalbheeroo
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January 31, 2014 at 4:34 PM delete

What goes around comes around and one should never wish or bad things to be inflicted on the others!
http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/01/28/100-words-on-saturday-20144

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February 1, 2014 at 4:33 AM delete

Painful to read...and to imagine as too many times, it's not fiction. Nice write!

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Menachery
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February 1, 2014 at 1:30 PM delete

Super well deserveddd!!!!!!!!!! bwahahaha

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February 1, 2014 at 7:59 PM delete

That is incredible pain for wrongdoers.

I am here: http://byastall.blogspot.in/2014/02/she-looked-most-beautiful-wednesday.html

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dianasmusings
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February 2, 2014 at 5:24 PM delete

There are many who can't take rejection gracefully and resort to dangerous means to get back. Nice way of combining both the prompts.

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Nabanita
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February 2, 2014 at 7:02 PM delete

Two prompts in one and a gud one at that :)

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sugandha
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February 3, 2014 at 3:48 PM delete

two prompts in one post, well blended...nice post.

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