Auspicious Rain

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Auspicious Rain




"Durga", Narayan called his wife to bring water outside to wash his hands and mouth covered with mud." You are looking happy," Durga inquired. " Why not? Today I got the job for one whole month under MNERGA at the site where government is levelling hill slopes with huge machines. We don't have to worry this month for anything." They thank god for giving them happiness.

As Narayan came inside his small mud house he saw his son and daughter reading in kerosene lamp. " I will bought solar lamp tomorrow for your studies children." Both of them get excited and hugged their father. Durga said that she was sure for some good news today looking at dark clouds since sign of good rains was considered auspicious. " Yes, Durga, Indra Dev ( Indra God ) is showering his blessings on us." After dinner Narayan covered thatch of his house with plastic sheet because it leaked during heavy rains. He decided that if he got the work also for the next month he would repair the roof as well. Dreams were flying high, this one month would release many burdens from his head.

They slept, the whole village slept and it rained that night heavy unstoppable rain resulted in landslide. The already loosened land by flattening of hill slopes and deforestation wiped out the village of 700 people. Dreams,aspirations,hopes were all buried under soil and debris of houses. In morning when rescue teams and media reached the site they found only heaps of soil engulfing men,women and children. They blamed auspicious rain for the tragedy neglecting carelessness of humans.

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

This fiction is a tribute to people of Malin village(Pune) who lost their everything in this tragedy. My prayers are with them.


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Anita
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August 2, 2014 at 12:24 PM delete

Oh! Very touching.
You have expressed the recent tragedy so realistically, Cifar.
Our hearts go out to the unfortunate souls - the victims of the landslide...

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Usha Menon
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August 2, 2014 at 8:18 PM delete

Very sad experience for the villagers. How their hopes were crushed!! Really unfortunate.

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Usha Menon
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August 2, 2014 at 8:20 PM delete

Very unfortunate!! How the tragedy crushed all their aspirations and dreams!

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August 3, 2014 at 10:33 AM delete

Touching and very well expressed. Sad, indeed Cifar :(

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kunal2024
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August 3, 2014 at 7:16 PM delete

May the departed souls rest in peace.The story has touched me to the core. Well written!

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Arpita Dash
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August 3, 2014 at 8:22 PM delete

nice post very touchy, sometimes tragedy like that happens beyond our expectation level.....

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A
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August 4, 2014 at 7:26 PM delete

Such a sad ending, Cifar. Unfortunately, it is a true story in villages.

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Anmol Rawat
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August 5, 2014 at 12:44 AM delete

How unfortunate and sad :/
This happens so many times and so many lives and dreams are destroyed.
Good one !

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vishalbheeroo
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August 5, 2014 at 1:12 AM delete

A sad reality touching the lives of many. Heart-wrenching.

http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/08/03/wow-and-it-rained-that-night/

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August 5, 2014 at 10:08 PM delete

We can't know future!!
well written :)

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swarn priya
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August 6, 2014 at 10:30 AM delete

Sad and unfortunate incident! Rain can be cruel at times!

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August 6, 2014 at 11:19 AM delete

very touching story and nicely written...Reading this makes me sad :(
Great post.

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Rahul suresh
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August 6, 2014 at 11:47 AM delete

nice one.. that's great to read this article. indeed.. keep sharing more awesome updates

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