Diary Confessions

Tuesday, November 26, 2013 18 Comments A+ a-

Diary Confessions


Had I looked back? I think I have not. I have not looked back to those promises I made with her, to her eyes which always wanted to see me close to her,to those moments which I can not buy today with enormous money I had, I never ever looked back to her love. But still the smell of old books brings her face in front of my eyes which she used to hide with them. That peacock feather which she kept in them takes me to her. If I had forgotten her then why this happens? Why? Why?........


100 words on Saturday -9 prompt: Had I looked back.

Wednesday prompt: the smell of old books


100 Words on Saturday - Write Tribe

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November 26, 2013 at 6:55 PM delete

you have weaved you story very well to suit two prompts at once. A great story too.

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November 26, 2013 at 7:24 PM delete

I like how you combined the prompts!

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Nischala
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November 26, 2013 at 7:25 PM delete

creatively connected both prompts. nice

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Rupertt Wind
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November 26, 2013 at 9:43 PM delete

thats so touching, and all it took you were hundred words.

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November 26, 2013 at 10:03 PM delete

You've managed to convey a wide range of emotions in those 100 words. Loved it! :)


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November 26, 2013 at 10:36 PM delete

Short and nice..never looked back but still have the smell of old books intact :)

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jahid
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November 27, 2013 at 12:33 AM delete

Well written and quite emotional !!

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November 27, 2013 at 2:39 AM delete

Beautifully expressed. You made the images come alive:)
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cifar shayar
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November 27, 2013 at 2:17 PM delete

thank god! I did it well? Thanks for reading

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cifar shayar
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November 27, 2013 at 2:20 PM delete

I am glad that my story touched you,thank you Rupert

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cifar shayar
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November 27, 2013 at 2:24 PM delete

Feels good to impress with my writing,thanks for visiting

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vishalbheeroo
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November 30, 2013 at 2:23 AM delete

We do leave some part of ourselves somewhere. What a beautiful and super creative post. It something we all experience from time-to-time.

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cifar shayar
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November 30, 2013 at 1:00 PM delete

thank you that was actually the thought behind this post

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