Winner

Saturday, October 04, 2014 10 Comments A+ a-

Winner



" Her dance shows her hunger to win," he raised her hand upwards to declare her the winner of the dance competition.

But worry and trouble on her face portraying her unhappiness regarding results, she looked at the barren face of the runner up contestant and took the mic from the presenter.

"Ladies and gentlemen I want to confess something," the organizer standing at the corner of the stage gave her an intense look of anger.

"I have paid a huge amount to the organizers to win this title as the other girl was unable to do so for her low financial status," she gave her prize to the runner up girl while the crowd gave her standing ovation.

Money can give you fame and luxury but satisfaction comes only with truth.


This post is linked to Three Word Wednesday(barren,intense,worry) and Five Sentence Fiction (hunger) and Theme Thursday (Trouble)

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Sandra
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October 4, 2014 at 5:22 PM delete

interesting true words!

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October 4, 2014 at 6:34 PM delete

Story with a moral! Satisfaction can't be bought, it is earned .. good one Cifar..

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October 4, 2014 at 11:47 PM delete

Excellent response to this prompt!

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Shailaja V
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October 4, 2014 at 11:47 PM delete

How brave of her to do so! What integrity you have painted. Good job :)

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vishalbheeroo
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October 5, 2014 at 1:56 AM delete

Satisfaction truly comes from within. Powerful:)

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Sheilagh Lee
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October 5, 2014 at 5:27 AM delete

truer words never spoken

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October 5, 2014 at 2:19 PM delete

If only more people could be so honest! Good for her.

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October 5, 2014 at 8:30 PM delete

wow, great job putting a message into such a small but interesting story!

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October 5, 2014 at 8:40 PM delete

Nice twist to this story! My 5SF Story: http://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com

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Nimi Arora
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October 28, 2014 at 9:04 AM delete

Very interesting, Cifar.
An intense way of letting go of worry and barrenness :)

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