Glance

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Glance


He was on his bicycle,she was going in car with her parents she gave a casual glance,soon they became friends which grew into love. They are from different castes and in India castes give no chance for such glance. They both now rest in peace.

This post is written for the 55 Fictionist Contest, hosted by IndiBlosp 

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July 10, 2013 at 3:32 PM delete

ya, agreed.. victim of caste system

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July 10, 2013 at 3:45 PM delete

wow... love story with a message on caste system... liked it...

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July 10, 2013 at 7:00 PM delete

the eyes of the heart passes through all obstacles...
Françoise

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July 10, 2013 at 10:15 PM delete

A bitter truth depicted nicely.

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July 12, 2013 at 1:38 AM delete

nice one..the ending made the story interesting...good luck for the contest

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