The Path

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The Path


She connived with secret agents to befriend his son as part of political intrigue to get confidential information.



 He was chained in foreign land for denying their offer after vehement argument.



The path we took in difficult situation defines our character. Following his father's teaching he went to the FBI. The conspiracy then was unraveled. 


This post is linked to  #55WordChallenge: Week Sixteen and Three Word Wednesday.(words in bold)

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  1. AnonymousJune 19, 2014 at 3:27 PM

    Good story...:)

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  2. Anita SabatJune 19, 2014 at 3:33 PM

    Nice secret-agent story, Cifar. Taking info from the child is a great tactics!
    Even my Mom shared the same message about the road taken defining our character. :)

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  3. J Cosmo NewberyJune 19, 2014 at 4:45 PM

    Short and tight!

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  4. UnknownJune 19, 2014 at 5:19 PM

    A good story.How cruel it was to involve a child in unlawful activity.

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  5. UmaJune 19, 2014 at 7:35 PM

    Beautiful..a great story in 55.

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  6. Jae RoseJune 19, 2014 at 7:36 PM

    You use contrast so powerfully in your work..the opening verse and image certainly points to a different path..very clever

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  7. Sheilagh LeeJune 19, 2014 at 8:08 PM

    A well thought out precise story.

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  8. AnonymousJune 19, 2014 at 8:58 PM

    Smart mother! Liked your story!

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  9. Donna BurmanJune 19, 2014 at 10:59 PM

    True.. the paths we choose define who we are.. :)

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  10. UnknownJune 20, 2014 at 1:02 AM

    great story !! as always!!

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  11. AnonymousJune 20, 2014 at 5:13 PM

    Very well done, Cifar. I like the conspiracy angle you took with the prompts!

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