Lucky Coin

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Lucky Coin



The cyclist cycled from night to sunrise to reach the telephone in adjacent town to get back his lucky coin.

He mistakenly telephoned from there with it. 
He wanted to reach before the man who came to collect coins from booth. He crashed into speeding truck and died on the spot, coin was really lucky ?

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Comments

  1. Anita SabatJune 14, 2014 at 3:34 PM

    Aww! he paid for his life for the coin, Cifar...
    Sad story.
    Great take on the prompt :)

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  2. AnonymousJune 15, 2014 at 12:11 AM

    OMG! That's sad! Good though!

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  3. UnknownJune 15, 2014 at 9:52 AM

    Very poignant story. In a few words you have captured emotions brilliantly.

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  4. UmaJune 15, 2014 at 3:24 PM

    Ouch! Sad but a great twist in the end.

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  5. Donna BurmanJune 15, 2014 at 5:34 PM

    Great take on the prompt Cifar.. :)

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  6. AmitAagJune 20, 2014 at 11:50 AM

    The twist at the end..!

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