Had I looked back?
I think I have not. I have not looked back to those promises I made with her, to her eyes which always wanted to see me close to her,to those moments which I can not buy today with enormous money I had, I never ever looked back to her love. But still the smell of old books
brings her face in front of my eyes which she used to hide with them. That peacock feather which she kept in them takes me to her. If I had forgotten her then why this happens? Why? Why?........
100 words on Saturday -9 prompt: Had I looked back.
Wednesday prompt: the smell of old books
you have weaved you story very well to suit two prompts at once. A great story too.ReplyDelete
thank god! I did it well? Thanks for readingDelete
I like how you combined the prompts!ReplyDelete
thanks a ton.Delete
creatively connected both prompts. niceReplyDelete
thats so touching, and all it took you were hundred words.ReplyDelete
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I am glad that my story touched you,thank you RupertDelete
You've managed to convey a wide range of emotions in those 100 words. Loved it! :)ReplyDelete
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Short and nice..never looked back but still have the smell of old books intact :)ReplyDelete
thanks mam for liking itDelete
Well written and quite emotional !!ReplyDelete
Beautifully expressed. You made the images come alive:)ReplyDelete
We do leave some part of ourselves somewhere. What a beautiful and super creative post. It something we all experience from time-to-time.ReplyDelete
thank you that was actually the thought behind this postDelete