Diary Confessions
Had I looked back? I think I have not. I have not looked back to those promises I made with her, to her eyes which always wanted to see me close to her,to those moments which I can not buy today with enormous money I had, I never ever looked back to her love. But still
the smell of old books brings her face in front of my eyes which she used to hide with them. That peacock feather which she kept in them takes me to her. If I had forgotten her then why this happens? Why? Why?........
100 words on Saturday -9 prompt:
Had I looked back.
Wednesday prompt:
the smell of old books
you have weaved you story very well to suit two prompts at once. A great story too.
ReplyDeletethank god! I did it well? Thanks for reading
DeleteI like how you combined the prompts!
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Deletecreatively connected both prompts. nice
ReplyDeletethats so touching, and all it took you were hundred words.
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I am glad that my story touched you,thank you Rupert
DeleteYou've managed to convey a wide range of emotions in those 100 words. Loved it! :)
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DeleteShort and nice..never looked back but still have the smell of old books intact :)
ReplyDeletethanks mam for liking it
DeleteWell written and quite emotional !!
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DeleteBeautifully expressed. You made the images come alive:)
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Thanks Ranvir
DeleteWe do leave some part of ourselves somewhere. What a beautiful and super creative post. It something we all experience from time-to-time.
ReplyDeletethank you that was actually the thought behind this post
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